The Ant And The Dove
One day, there
was an thirsty Ant, The Ant found a river, then he want drunk a river.
Suddenly he was
slipped to dropped in the river. He asked for help to other animals. So he
said;” Help me..!. The Dove heard his said. Then The Dove helped The Ant with a
leaf. When The Ant thank to The Dove, there was a hunter will killed The Dove.
But The Ant ran
and The Ant bit a hunter. When a hunter felt sick, The Dove flew early. Finally
The Dove and The Ant safed.
then he want drunk a river.--> drunk is V3, it should be 'he drank the water in the river'
BalasHapusSuddenly he was slipped to dropped in the river --> slip is already a verb so you don't have to put to be (was) before verb. the the sentence should be 'suddenly the ant slipped and dropped to the river"
will killed--> after will, would, can, and could must be followed with V1. so it should be "will kill"